Oh goodness...what a heartbreaking piece of beauty. What an amazing poem my dear. Filled with such pain and yet there is such a sweet touch to it. The last stanza really finished it off well. Such a nice poem, Lindsey. Really.

Great job on your poem

I'll be waiting for forever and a day
Because I'm not sure where else to start
By falling in love with you, I have to say
I am the one breaking my heart

This stanza really touched me.

Nice write. sometimes writing is the only things that helps. 5/5 from me. best wishes.

I feel like you in many ways. I wish I could find a way to re-ignite the flame which once existed.
Lyndsay, be strong. You will find someone who really appreciates you.

Sry in my poem that must have been a misunderstanding, i don't think hes a sico the computer would'nt let me put the little marks, 'sicko' people call him a sickio hes really not but thank u 4 the comment! 5/5 for this poem

Excellent form! I really enjoyed reading it. I completely describes my emotions toward my ex. Brilliant, your a great writer. =D

One way I have of reading poetry is to read from the bottom line first and go backwards from there. It doesn't work with all poems but I got a great sense of grief and love that are innertwined with each other reading both forward and backward. Its a great deal to be able to express these thoughts and feelings onto paper or type. He should read this and if he has it in him to feel anything he would break down and regret everything that he didnt give or allow to be given. I feel for you, even if you blame yourself or him. The experience is good for helping to move on or maybe even to grow if it possibly could end up working out. Bravo for being able to speak these words of truth from deep within yourself.

Gd