Lol i loved it! i enjoyed it alot!

Lol i still cant tie my SHOES!!!!!

Hahaha so funny. and very good. 5/5.
willow oxo

Good poem man,
its different to your usual stuff, thought it was great.
-Black night-

Haha that was funny! i loved these 2 lines:

"tying shoes is like a way of life
boys, if you can't tie shoes, get you a wife"

haha, that made me laugh... well great job! and thanks for the comment... 5/5

"tying shoes is like a song"

^^ I didn't like that part. I just didn't feel that it made a whole lot of sense, but was rather there just to fit the rhyme scheme.

However, I found this to be both original and unique in concept.

I loved the ending, certainly brought a giggle to my lips.
I have tried to write humoress poems and find them extremely difficult, so on the whole I think you did a rather good job with this.