Nice poem...i alway rate high for originality which i think this has. Welcome to our club as well.

A sweet poem and a friendly write, the wording is great and the poem stands out with great originality

I like this as its one as it gives a real sense of unity and equality- that everyone goes through the same things. its beautifully written as well.

Short and quite sweet (esp. the ending).
I liked the idea of the repetition, it sent out a clear message that personalised the poem for everyone.
On the second line, I think you meant "you're"... it's a common homophone mistake.
Maybe some "newer" words than "pain" and "tears" would add more emphasis to the write.
Thanks for sharing.

This was cute. And very original. I enjoyed it and each little world thing was adorable. Since it's such a cute short poem there's not much to critique on
5/5

Very short, but straight to the point, I liked the repetition of "world" in the begining, it was an interesting style of writting which I just so happen to like. I must say although short, this poem was excellently written, great work my friend! Keep up the fantastic work!

Peace, Joe

This is beautiful advice to the world In a world of complex issues i would love to and have the will to smile, laugh, cry, love, live
sleep t a great awakening of do it anyway.
your poem says it all but you may want to google "anyway" as to further comformation that your wording is quite inspiring
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I like how you put it into a way of seeing what the world is like nice work keep it up

Nicely written I like how you display the your poem in a form of advice. Living in this world we will all go through what has being stated in the poem crying ...being loved etc. It was certainly a delightful to read this poem. Keep it up

Excellent job
5/5