Nice, you're a very good writer, best of luck for the contest.

It was good poem and it was really good read 5/5 from me

Woah nice write I hope you win it!!

Ohh. I loved every bit of this poem. It was so ... ahh.. i cant find the right word to use. I LOOVEDD IT though. a major 5/5.

Wow, this is amazing. It flowed so well & was so sweet. It had a lot of emotion in it & was beautifully written.

The imagery in this, really captivated me. It was so touching.

Beautifully written.

Bri x

Great poem. Great flow, good vocab. Very sweet and the imagery was good. 5/5