Awww this is sad but it was a really great poem! i liked the rhyming in it 5/5

~Kristina

Its soo nice!!! i like how your poems are differant then all the other ones i read on here! 5/5

Wow this is really good.. its short but its actually really filled with a lot of emotion.. i love the first few lines and how it starts off kind of like a story.. i really enjoyed reading this a lot! .. very very nice job. Keep it up! =)