A sad poem altogethr and i hate the line " lifes a bi**h then you marry one"
my dad uses it all the time, i can relate greatly written poem thou

Nice poem with a nice quote but my advice to you to use less converstaion more different words

"Life's a b**ch and then you marry one."

This good
See ya

Wow! The last line left me speechless. The way youbuilt the story up... Amazing. Grea job. These situations are hard, and it's frusterating when you can't do anything about them. Just know that it's not your fault. Fantastic!!

Ciao

Loved this poem!
there are so many emotions in the entire poem! you did such a wonderful job, wow! 5/5