This is a great attempt at haiku. They're harder than they look, aren't they?
I see you stuck to the traditional syylable count. You also carefully included the suggested break, which should happen after line one, or two, in this case after line two.
Quite a pretty image too.
Punctuation wouldn't go amiss though.
Thanks for sharing.

Short but very nice to read. i enjoyed it. xxtake carexx

Short, but *makes hand gestures* you know. Oh well, anyways 5/5 anyways :D

I like this Haiku! i think you did an amazing job on it.

Cool 5/5