Oomg, this poem is amazing Nathan! Wow, it's one of my favorites.
You an amazing poet, never stop <3
Jess

You did way better than I would've done. Great job... sad but I loved it! I know what you're feeling...

Ciao

Excellent and sad. The reader can feel the emotion. 5*

Wow Disturbed one, such a beautiful poem. I actually found this poem by chance because I've been listening to Taylor Swifts new song "Teardrops On My Guitar" and I saw your poem so I had to read it! It's better than I imagined, so beautiful! Keep up the good work 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Thankyou for your comments on my poems Distant and Boys Of Summer. Much appreciated.

I like this poem. I can reli feel the emotion from it. 5/5. =D

I like the title of this poem and it fits the poem perfectly i love it 5/5

I play guitar and i had to read this because of that and the song teardrops on my guitar. i loved it. its one of those things that r sooo sad there wonderfly. keep writing =)

The last stanza is most definitely the best. The only thing I could find that needed improvement was the flow of a few of the lines. Other than that you have written yet another great poem. Good job!

I love how this poem comes together so easily. Lovely flow, lovely style, 5/5. Em x