Comments : Cherry Blossom Tree (Haiku) #2

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Kay,*

    This is another extremely beautiful Haiku, I really enjoyed how you said 'spring fourth' it's true they do spring and it reminds me of how a magician pulls magic flowers out of his hat, one minute it's dark and black (the hat) the next it's bright beautiful flowers. That's the exact image I got here so I loved your description. I'm also really fond of the word radiant, again it fits perfectly with the cherry blossoms. I don't know why you say you're not good at Haiku's you've done an excellent job with these three I've read.

    -Mel.