So glad to have u back and this is a fantastic comeback. Lovely written piece here.
Right from the first stanza till the last one u hv captured so much of passion within ur words. Its really a very very beautifully written poem.

keep writing

all the best and take care

Very nice to read..5/5...

where did u go?..
we missed ya :(

Gorgeous poem!
It's so nice to see love poetry so beautifully written with heart
5/5 for sure
*Gem*

A very heart warming poem, each line sounds like coated with true love syrup :)

I don't know whether they call it a wedding 'game' or not but anyways it's a good emotional poem... Nice to see you back.

Hey yaar,,
how r u?
its been ages since i read any poems..
miss tlking you ya.,..hope your good..
:)
tkcare

sonam

Hey a very nice from..straight from the heart..WOnderful reading :)

...lovely and sweetly warm

Wow!

i havnt been on this site for so long but its soo good to be reading your great writes yaar.

beautiful!
5/5