M. When you brought up Pan, I was a bit lost. However, I like the mythology connection. Your writing is unique (I've looked over a couple of other poems, but I didn't want to leave a one liner since I didn't know what to say...).

Thanks for the comment.

Short, but has a lot a good meaning. I liked it.

And I wouldn't say that I wrote my poem like that intentionally. I don't focus on rythm, or style or anything. I just get my words out, and I'm happy, however they may come out. So, I stick with it.

Thanks for the comment though. =]

Wonderful, truly wonderful. I like the mythological theme, and the words you used.
I like when the poem is short but so powerful.
5/5

NicE poeM.
VerY truE.
EnjoyeD readinG iT.
TakE carE...

LUZAn