Aw, this was really sweet. You painted a nice picture with your words here. Really nice read. 5/5

marcella

Very nice, love it!

Wow, i really like this poem as well, your words are so nice and i always like the messages you give out through your poems, great job.

Awesome poem
You had me reading until the end
Great way to show the suspense
Sensational job.

I love this poem .. it creates such a clear image - you sound like you're describing someone

Argh the enter key went mad... like you're describing someone I know in the 2nd stanza - great work - i love it xxx

This made me smile a bit....its lik the 3 s which is..short simple and sweet =)