Good work, if a slight bit bland. Just ever so slightly bland, though. Otherwise, it was a well-written piece. 4/5 from me.

The other guy is wrong! I'm touched by your poem, I love it.

Wow this is amazing! Thank you for the comment... :]]

This one was fantastic also =) I believe that there is one special person out there for each of us and all we have to do is hold on and try not to screw up to much until we find that person =P
I loved this one like the others ^.^
Rhea

Wow Sam,

This is one of your earlier poems I had not read before. I t is absolutely beautiful!

Take care, my friend

5/5 Ingrid