Comments : The Ghosts of yesterday

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    2....this is crazy...who voted this?? i think u must re enter this poem. its really a beautiful poem and u dont deserve 2 for this.
    if in case u re enter, let me know and i'll vote again

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Mo

    Dont know who voted 2 for it... I wont re-enter it tho... Im ok with getting bad votes if thats what people think of it - all entitled to our own opinionts... but would have preferred if they had the guts to at least tell me why they gave me that score in a comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a wonderful poem. I love your ending stanza.

    And although sometimes I cant help it
    Reliving my mistakes and dreams
    I still cant help but thinking...
    I should be living in the now, it seems

    This is really great.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Well hey there...i read the thingie u posted on the forum...thought id check it out
    its pretty good...i agree with Traci though
    i gave u a 5/5....well...i think its a 4...but im sure the one who voted 2 did it by mistake or just to mess with u cause of suppression he has towards u..or jealousy...or plain messing with u...so yeah...i gave u a 5/5 just to fix it a bit...=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "And although sometimes I cant help it
    Reliving my mistakes and dreams
    I still cant help but thinking...
    I should be living in the now, it seems "

    I know i can relate to this stanza a lot.
    I always look back on past mistakes and constantly looking at ways i could have avoided them and how to avoid them in the future.
    But the last line of your poem sums it all up
    Excellently done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow, this is amazing, 5/5 it flowed perfectly, and i can relate to this feeling, you finished it perfectly, thx for the comment
    gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. i liked the depth of this poem. great write.

    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Definetly a message people can relate to. You did a nice job and it by no means deserved a 2. I'll give you a 5 and look forward to reading more of your work!!! You really put the icing on the cake with that ending stanza!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really loved this poem I loved the melloncolly message it had and the vocabulary was wonderful kudos to you on this wone I gave it a 5 Plot121