Hello kitty,
what a nice poem with a strong emotion showing, great work, thank you very much for mentioning my name, it means alot to me.
you have always been my favorite. keep up the great work like always.

Awe. That was very sweet. It flowed well & had a lot of emotion in it. It was very strong & deep.

With ever heartbeat,
And ever breathe I take.

^ In both of these lines , it should be ''every'' instead of ''ever''.

I really liked the last stanza. It was really sweet.

Bri x

Omg. i loved this. it was so sweet. well done babe.
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

Again, the flow was very choppy. The message was great and all that jazz. You just have a hard time putting emotion into words. Not trying to be mean. You also have minor grammar issues.

To be honest..I was a little confused lol then I read it and I understood it more I think it is just one of those more intense poems where you might hae to read it a second or third time... I think it is great and complex! You have great talent I love all of your poems they move me! I also loved this one just for the fact that it is a love poem and usually behind every great love poem there is a lot of great emotion and I think you captured it tremendously The last paragraph was great so do not worry about anything there...

I want you to know,
You are loved,
With ever heartbeat,
And ever breathe I take.

Sometimes that ^ is the hardest thing to tell or explain to someone I mean if people could just figure it out and know it is true you know?

For every tear you shed,
Every tantrum you throw,
I will cover it
With a passionate kiss.

This is so adorable and cute I loved it it was passionate and sweet and caring all bottled up into one perfect stanza

I have said it once,
But I'll say it again,
My Sweet,
Just to make you smile.

Doesnt it feel like you have to repeat everything for people to understand you love them...I think this was adorable

I lvoe your writing and I love this poem because it is simple and caring and loving and beautiful nice job

Great. Just great. There isn't much else to say. It's beautiful.