Comments : What ever makes you happy

  • 17 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    I was draw to this poem at once because of its title. My boyfriend used to say that to me all the time. He is my ex now, and it was an abusive situation, but not quite as you were saying it here. Still, I liked the read. Might I suggest that you put "I Love You" in the second to last line in parentheses? It might help to show what you mean more that way. Good write.

    ~Tainted Miko~