As I recall the good times I won't express any sorrow
I''ll keep you in my heart for there is hope for tomorrow
If it's destined to walk away then that's what it will be
One thing I assure, my love will last for eternity

this is really amazing, its so nice to have u back on the site and spl like this....atlast we posted this one.

very nicely done dear...great work

all the best and take care

As I recall the good times I won't express any sorrow
I''ll keep you in my heart for there is hope for tomorrow
If it's destined to walk away then that's what it will be
One thing I assure, my love will last for eternity

This really was an amazing poem and I really loved how you ended it.
Excellent!!!!

Nicely done....the piece as a whole works well....good transition of styles....All the best, Debbie

Nice job on your poem Especially likrd these two stanzas.

Nothing has been harder than leaving you behind
Every single step away from you took eternity
Games of illusions were played by my mind
Reflection of your face shadowed my sanity

Every tear fantasized of falling on your hands
Somehow reality washed my wishes away
Blowing whispers in the air for someone to understand
Realizing the difference between present and yesterday

They were so heart breaking.

2nd time im reading this poem and it sounded better than the first =p good job! very well written. xx

Dear, what a Beautiful penned, as the title, it remind me a long time ago.. what else i can say...beautifully done!

As I recall the good times I won't express any sorrow
I''ll keep you in my heart for there is hope for tomorrow
If it's destined to walk away then that's what it will be
One thing I assure, my love will last for eternity

Too good. Very rhythimic and meaningful.

Exquisite Collab, Great Write!!!