Comments : Leaving You Behind (Collab)

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    As I recall the good times I won't express any sorrow
    I''ll keep you in my heart for there is hope for tomorrow
    If it's destined to walk away then that's what it will be
    One thing I assure, my love will last for eternity

    this is really amazing, its so nice to have u back on the site and spl like this....atlast we posted this one.

    very nicely done dear...great work

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    As I recall the good times I won't express any sorrow
    I''ll keep you in my heart for there is hope for tomorrow
    If it's destined to walk away then that's what it will be
    One thing I assure, my love will last for eternity

    This really was an amazing poem and I really loved how you ended it.
    Excellent!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done....the piece as a whole works well....good transition of styles....All the best, Debbie

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on your poem Especially likrd these two stanzas.

    Nothing has been harder than leaving you behind
    Every single step away from you took eternity
    Games of illusions were played by my mind
    Reflection of your face shadowed my sanity

    Every tear fantasized of falling on your hands
    Somehow reality washed my wishes away
    Blowing whispers in the air for someone to understand
    Realizing the difference between present and yesterday

    They were so heart breaking.

  • 13 years ago

    by dora

    2nd time im reading this poem and it sounded better than the first =p good job! very well written. xx

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Dear, what a Beautiful penned, as the title, it remind me a long time ago.. what else i can say...beautifully done!

    As I recall the good times I won't express any sorrow
    I''ll keep you in my heart for there is hope for tomorrow
    If it's destined to walk away then that's what it will be
    One thing I assure, my love will last for eternity

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    Too good. Very rhythimic and meaningful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite Collab, Great Write!!!