Thats a lovely poem sophs, well done xxx

Aw, this is so sweet Sofi.
Your very talented, i never knew you had it in you.
I really like this one.
xxx

Wow! Bravo! Bravo! Thos poem was truly captivating, and I want to read it again, and again! I haven't read this style before, and found it refreshing. If you can write another poem like this one, I would surly be happy to read it!

This poem flowed wonderfully with a flawless rhyme scheme that did not distract from the point of the poem. I personally would have felt more comfortable with angelic you, but angel you works for me as well

This is my favorite of these 3,it proves that you're good at dark poems
Just don't forget to keep it up
See ya
Laura

Beautiful poem. It flows very nicely within each stanza. Keep up the good work!

I like this one.. its a great poem!