Dreams are too good to come true.

This is perfect, honestly. This line is brilliant. It's so true. Dreams are to good to come true, so sometimes you must endure the nightmares.

I soo can relate to this :(
5/5 for this beautifull piece :))

I LOVED this!
Oh my...I have tears in my eyes...Damn you for making me all emotional on my birthday lol =D
I thought the flow was flawless, I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the first stanza was such a great opener and it just kept getting better.
You did an excellent job with this.

I love this poem, this absolutely my favorite poem for today =)
what i liked the most was the rhyming, great job 5/5

Great job! this was mad cuteeeeee. i loved the rhyming and the flow was great!

But I know that you never loved me
And baby, that's what hurts the most
Knowing I gave my heart completely
To such an undesiring host.

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I loved that stanza. & the last one tooo!! This poem was just amazing. Perfect. I could relate to it on so many levels! Amazing write! Never stop writing!!

-` Liz

Omggg. I have tears in my eyes ;[ I can relate to this alot.. and it was just so powerful & beautiful..

You are an amazing writer, deary.

Oh what truth that's in this piece :]

But I know that you never loved me
And baby, that's what hurts the most

^ favorite lines.. wonderful, truly.

Bri [x]

COMMENT # 2

again flawless flow.. the rhyming was good one or two seemed a bit forced... but all in all a strong write..

and i LOVE this line
"In unspoken terms you had shown"