Comments : The kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Yes....beautiful again 5/5...what else can I say

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Short but powerful! Great job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Barry
    How beautiful...seems like you are getting speacil feelings from somewhere....lol
    Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    EVEN THOUGH ITS A BIT SHORT ITS BUEATIFUL AND I THINK YOU DID A MARVELOUS JOB 5/5 =]

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    In my heart is all of you
    In this soul, all is through

    forever............

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    That was short but beautifully written...great job

    melissa

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Heaven......with you....

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow

  • 16 years ago

    by ruth

    I like this style of writing. It is short and does not waste time getting to the point

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    In my heart is all of you
    In this soul, all is through
    In this love is my destiny
    Hold my hand, walk with me
    In space, in time...In eternity

    Soon my love....soon....

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    What a beautiful poem, I love the way it flows, 5/5