Personally, I thought this poem was rather well done. It had deep emotion in it, and I really like that. It kept me wanting to read more.

The flow was a little rocky in areas, but overall it wasn't bad. I really liked the story line in this. I don't know why, but I seem more accustumed to sad or dark poems rather than love or friendship poems. Weird =S That's prolly why I like it so much =P 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Omg!!! Thay's so sad...It's always best to talk to someone even when you do feel depressed and everything. I thought this poem had great imagery. And ncie words

Hey,..can you comment and rate my poem "My one and only".. shane wrote it for me, haha, and i was wondering what you thought!! thanks!!

Heyy!! what are you doing today? are you hanging out with wil tonight!!?... i had lacrosse practice from 9 until like 3:30, so im extremely tired... and at like 4:30 to 7 i have softball pratice ughh i guess thats what happens when your on varsity softball and lacrosse haha... so i think me and shane are gonna like hang out after 8:30 so i can like come home and shower or w.e haha... comment back!!

Oo im sorry... but thats cool your going w. mandy... yeah well have fun, but they pushed back my practice from 6 30 to 9. so me and shane will have to hang out a lot later..but w.e haha...maybe well see a movie?! haha i hope so

Oo thats cool that you got to see wil... shane just left my house, bc he came to my lacrosse tournament, and then came to my house afterwards, and he just left bc i have like 2 more projects to do haha... but yeah comment back!!

I know we have soo many projects... we just like hung out, and like played a game haha...and we hung out w. my brotehr and stuff...we just like chilled, and relaxed haha... comment backk!!

Aww this is really good... but it makes me sad. i hope life is a little better now. Don't give up!! <33

Aww good for you.... guys are soo cute!... i love guys haha.... especially when they say cute things like i love you... haha comment backk

Good poem. keep it up.
~emS~

Did wil ever txt you back?!... i saw shane today, and he acted somewhat different, and it kinda seemed like he was trying to make me jealous or w.e bc he went up to this random a*s girl, and was like heyy!! and started talking.. i was like umm okay?...it was really ackward... but im supposed to hang out w. him tonight, so hopefully we will be able to fix everything...oh yeah btw is your school an all girls school?

O rly thats cool...like i want to go online, and yesterday was like the 1st time ive been online in like almost a month.. i would go on now, but im getting ready and finishing up my hw haha...i hate being busy haha.. comment back

Woah i was def. kidding my sn is xoLAXox08...haha i have crazy fingers that type random #s haha..but i just signed on!! haha yay! the 1st time in awhile haha

Omg I loved it! So sad, still so lovely.
Very touching and full of emotion. Nicely done! The rhyming is great too. My favourite part was:

i want to tell about the pain
that I'm going through
but diary your the only one
that i can tell this to

Loved it 5/5

Keep it up!

Everybody gets depressed to the point where they feel theres no reason to continue, but I assure you when times seem at there worst something will come along and change your outlook on life. amazing write 5/5

Hey you.. can you please comment my new poem, sweetest kisses... thanksss.. ttul online.. bye cutie<3

Woo hooo im sooo happy!!!! haha

First off, im glad things are going better for you now! This reminds me of the poems I used to write, when I was depressed. You express you're feelings wonderfully, well done

Aww this is very sad... I hope th end part isn't true! Good poem, though!

Wow, such a cute poem! and i am so glad to here that your doing better!!---tara