Just love collaboration.....

Barry I really loved writing this with you....

Debbie
You and Barry have done a wonderful job on this collab..Your words melted together in a beautiful poem of love :)

Close your eyes and see
Inside you are all of me
I Know you are mine
Souls forever entwined
Breaths of you become my bliss
Nothing to hold, all to miss
Stopped in time with an Angel kiss
I am your all, in all of this

Excellent!
Love Cindy

Beautifully penned collaboration. I am so happy to see this from 2 talented poets. Excellent job!!

I really loved this poem, the flow and expression of words were fantastic, this is one to be really proud off.

THIS IS GREAT 5/5 GOOD JOB

Wow, a very beautiful poem. I loved it sooooo much. It was great to read.

This was excellent and breathtaking.
Excellent.

Enjoyable to read... lovely poem of love!

Girl.. I really liked this poem.. so much feeling ... I felt your love in your verse. Thank you for writing it. ..I loved the "souls forever entwined" :)
tom

Loved it loved it. kudos to you and barry. very nice write. 5/5

I have read this one so many times, but somehow could never come up with appropriate words for appreciating it. I myself have done a collab recently and i could imagine the feelings one get after posting it....spl when the poem is so spl like this one.

Great work by both of you....hope to see more of poems coming.

all the best and take care

Debbie,
Its a very heart warming poem .The words melts in heart like soft melodious music. Very well written.

Thanks for taking time to read my poem,really appreciates it.

Regards and wishes,
chavii.

"I love you so
As the wind driven snow
As the dawn's morning glow
You are love, all I know
As the moon's soft shine
As Earth's endless time
No reason or rhyme
I Know you are mine "

Oh.. that last stanza tug the strings of my heart and played a happy tune =)
You two should be so proud of this diamond of a poem
Well done Sweets
5/5
*gem*

Another beautiful poem

You are so beautiful.......

Such a beautiful poem. The flow is again perfect. You're both incredibly talented people.