Very nice keep up the great work
4/5

Mm. your depth is is at a whole different level than pretty much all the poes i read.

keep up the amazing talent.

I really like this poem.....it got me thinking... i know what i think it means but i was hoping u could explain what was the mesage u were trying to give. i mean a poem can be interpreted 10000 of ways but there is only one TRUE meaning.:D