Oh! I am the first to comment yay!! lol, anyway... i loved this one as well, you really have a nack of writing don't you lol. good adjectives. loved it. i voted it 5/5!!

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I love your work, i really do. great vocab and descriptions in this poem, it is so original, i think you must have a raw talent, i cannot describe it anyother way

Wow its a really nice poem!