Comments : A Wish

  • 13 years ago

    by MidnightKisses

    That poem sounds like a magical dream!! hope it comes true for ya.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    I lie on the ground
    And stare into space
    As the stars start to form
    Into your beautiful face

    This is just the perfect combination of words. Wow, I seriously was holding my heart as I melted through this poem. I think the guy I like should take some pointers from you!
    Great write, really, truely amazing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Rose

    Good job! if only all men were like you. 5/5!