Amazing! Oh wow...If I ever need someone to write something eloquent and full of metaphors and deep in figurative meaning, i would definately come to you. So amazing. If I didn't know you well, perhaps I wouldn't understand the foundation of your poetry, but since I do I must say it's always a breathtaking read. =]

Spanx for your comments!!!

I really liked this one, which is strange cos free verses aren't normally my thing, lol
But the meanings in this were to great an opportunity to pass up on.
I spent a long time reading and re'reading and i'm thoroughly satisfied with what i gained from it.
An outstanding piece!
5/5
*Gem*

R