Yenning for each other's soft, gentle touch

Yenning ? Unless it`s a word I don`t know or have ever heard of, do you mean yearning or something ? Just making note .
But anyway, I liked this poem a lot . The ending seemed to tie everything together & I love the choice of words . Especially "be my endless love ." Very well written acrostic [did I spell it right ?] . I don`t know what else to saay .
Just keep it up .
..__MiNDYY

You did a great job with this acrostic! I really enjoyed this one. Acrostics are not easy but you pulled it off! Wonderful! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Very nice poem, i really think this one is good except for the spelling error or two i seen it is a well wriiten and emotion packed poem, sorry this took so long and i will continue reading on,
nessa

Beautifully done!!
5/5

God bless u

This poem had a lot of emotion. I think all of your poems are amazzzing but I have to say this is probably one of my favorites.

5/5! <3 Keep up the amazing work!

Again, don't use &, it stops the flow.

Yenning = yearning???? i believe that was a mispelling unless there is a word i don't know.

through each = inside each???? makes it seem better, but it is also fine how you say it..

there day & night = there BOTH day and night ???? sounds a little better for the flow.

that crosses over our path = dear, that makes absolutely no sense lol! I know i'm being critical but since when do bumps cross over US?? Don't we cross over the bumps?

View; so amazing, so perfect, and so flawless = view:

never? = dear, what's up with the question mark ?

lol! Great poem though. I'll have to read it again.

5/5
~Steve.

NOTICE PEOPLE:

yen2 /yɛn/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[yen] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation, noun, verb, yenned, yen·ning. Informal.
–noun
1. a desire or craving: I had a yen for apple pie.
–verb (used without object)
2. to have a craving; yearn.

YENNING ISSS A WORD! :]

I prefered the other acrostic to be honest.
Although this was good, I felt some of the wording could have been more creative. Also, the flow was off in places, but in an acrostic poem I know it's hard to keep it fluent. I know you can do it though, as you did it in your other one.
"Enduring every bump that crosses over our path" is a bit hmm confusing.
I beleive the idea you're trying to portray is to hinder or obstruct the path, rather than cross over...maybe you could take another look at that line?
Thanks for sharing.