Taht was sooo great!!1 i loved it....i agree with Robert Kerry Gardiner...5/5...and thanks for the comments! would you mind commenting some of my other poems?! thanks and i would love to here your opinions!

Gasttlee
This is a very powerful piece. You would not think with so few words you could make someone stop and think. You have done this very well.
Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

Very well done. this poem was well put and the words you used were excellent.

5/5 David

This is a very well written poem, Gasttle! The words that you chose to describe morality really worked well together and made the poem flow. The last 2 lines gave the poem an excellent ending, 5/5.
I hope to read more of your poems, so keep up the great work.

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

One cannot exist without the other, good job

your servant:
david

Hmm ive never read a poem liike this.. but it was ok i liiked how it was unique.

<3 i love you silly

With each little stanza its like these words are ment to be together and the last stanza

Distinct from all unpopularity,
do you care for morality?

its like being popular brings mortality at leaste make u feel that way.. but idk its kinda confusing

good job