Comments : Wrong Guy*

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I like how you portrayed realization through rejection, and being hurt. I thought the vocabulary and rhyme scheme was a bit simple, but you still described the emotion and point of the poem quite well. I liked the lines in the first stanza,
    " it was you I was talking to
    now all I hear is the dial tone."
    They portrayed the feeling of rejection and abandonment very well. And I also liked,
    "I thought that you'd be different from the rest
    but now I see you weren't in the end."
    (I can definitely relate)

    Overall I enjoyed the piece, Good job

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    So beautifully written! Good job. I love this one. And most of all I liked these last lines:

    I guess we weren't meant to be
    it was hard for me to see,
    that you were just...
    the wrong guy for me.

    Wonderful poem..
    I can fully understand what you mean.. Everything is perfect, but then everything is ruined in a snap..

    Anyway

    It was great! 5/5

    Keep it up
    & take care :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    I love this poem! amazing writing. i gave it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh wow nice emotion i think you couldve been a wee more descriptive but it was very very emotional all on it;s own the right guy will come i know it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    GOODNESS.
    I loved this poem.
    It was PERFECT. :]
    So much emotion, and so easily related to.
    I loved it.
    Even though it made me want to cry.
    Lol.
    You did a great job.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    This poem was AMAZING.
    very well written.
    i gave you a 5/5