WOW. its easy to see that u really love that girl. everything you wrote was great. all the similes were amazing, especially this one:

When your scared I'll hold you close and keep you out of harm.
Cause when your in my embrace I thanks god for giving me this angel in my arms.

great write. 5/5. keep it up!

Wow very powerful and sometimes it takes almost loosing sumone to know JUST how much you love them and need them...great job keep it up and ill read more later

melissa