Thats an excellent poem you have worded it so well. c x x cx c x c x c x

The rhyme and flow is great. A sad and touching write but written beautifully. Well done Laura, well done.

Sad, yet beautiful. The flow was fantastic.

"Robotic emotions dictate my learned social reactions
Embraced by numbness preventing tear contractions"
^^^ Awesome line!

"Outward appearances are fairly easy to contain
Difficulty arises trying to mask my internal pain"
^^^ Love the wording here!

Great job!

Beautiful
stunning
touching
deep
5/5

love
amy
pls wil u check out murder or suicide im sure u'll love it

Poetry is always a helpful outlet for the pain that all feel inside, especially the blinding pain that seems to destroy not only our world, but also ourselves. Remember, that even through you might not know all of use at CC&P personally (as in face to face,) we are still a family that cares a lot. You are welcome to vent to us, because we care about you. Understand that through pain can flow deep, friendship does too. And keep writing your beautiful poetry.

~Miko~

Wow, i loved it.
the last stanza was my favoirte pulled it all together.
just brillant.

Very well written.
one of my favorites.

This is a great poem showing so much emotion in it i'll give ti a 5/5 this poem is sweet!

Definate 5!!!! I LOVED IT. you are a great poet! mad props!

Very sad. and nicely panned... i love the way you flow your words. gr8 job take care

I LOVE this!
The first line had me completely hooked and though I didn't want this to end, I wasn't disappointed when it did.
So beautifully written, and I thought the flow was flawless.
Excellent work.

Really great poem i like it when the words cut deep and express what ur feeling its osm plz come and check out some of mine and review them somewhat i really want to start writing better well n e hoo great write

-laura-
p.s. my name is laura too!!