Bill
This is so beautiful....Love is such a treasure to hold close to the heart.

Take my hand, my best friend
Keep your faith in me
Your heart will never have to mend
I will love you an eternity

This stanza is really beautiful.
Take Care Your Friend Cindy

Bill,

Your love poems are always so sentimental. I envy you that. I have yet to reach your caliber of writing of lasting love. You write of the beauty of love, and though I try, I tend to focus on the harshness of it.

You are a true inspiration.

Always,
Jeannie

Take my hand, my wonderful lover
As I lead you to what we desire
Between the sheets, under cover
Where our souls meet and burn like fire

This was very beautiful and I loved the ending. Great!

Wow, what a wonderfull poem this is!!!

i wish someone sed me like this word... i loved ur poem and the feelings and how you describe the power of love. gd work.

Amazing, the wording is very good and the basic content better.

Wonderful job! its ur another amazing poem

luv

I love the poem! it reminds me of better days.

Whoa!!..just a wonder poem made:D
cannot describe just how much this moved me as i have just been proposed to and its the most wonderful thing in the world!!..
keep up the good work
bree...5/5

Very nice and beautiful

Take my hand, my best friend
Keep your faith in me
Your heart will never have to mend
I will love you an eternity

These were my favorite lines. I totally agree with you, it is very important to be best friends as well!
Very touching and filled with love for your wife. I loved this poem, great job, Bill.

Take care and please get well soon,

5/5 Ingrid