You did a really awesome job. 5/5

I really like it. i feel ya on this one

Just what I needed to read at a time like this. Wonderful job....continue writing in the future, please. Lol. 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

This is a great poem. you did a really good job on this one. 5/5

Kalee

Interesting poem. You brought the reader into your world and let them experience what you go through. As much as I dislike cutting and people who do so, I respect the poem. Good job, keep on writing.

Woah...absolutly....!AMAZING! this poem was just fantastic I too once did this and it's not good but I got help nice job your great!!

Your flow and rhyming was excellent. The over poetry made sense and was beautifully orchestrated, throughout. I really liked your bridging, too. I also liked the theme and variation. You are to be commended. This is truly a work of art.

You are such a really good write its really beautiful and sad, but you are really good keep it up 5/5

Wow this is so good! I can really relate to this poem in so many ways. people just don't understand what people go through. 5/5

<UnToLd TrUtH>

You're like amazing! I love this one too!! I'm so adding you to my favs. great job

~Elisha

Beautiful poem with a superb flow and descriptions. It had great and appropriate wordings and all poetic qualities. Your poem is strong with lexical power and poetic quality. 5/5 all the way

no power or will to change
as i write theses words
blood drips upon the page

My fav lines

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Fsams

Great poem.i can relate to it alot.great job.

Wow. it was beautifully written, i loved it, i usta cut aswell, but my partner helped me stop when i first got with him. i think you did an awesome poem. it was great 5/5

i live the life of a cutter
no power or will to change
as i write theses words
blood drips upon the page

my fave lines ^^

p.s just as an observation maybe you should think about putting it into 4 lines stanza's so the reader doesn't get lost at where there reading, i did a few times. but it was great 5/5

It was really great, i loved it. the poem had great flow and great wording and was very powerful. beautiful job

Great poem.
Good flow, good word choice.
Deep and powerful.
Great piece of writing.
Take care

You did a good job with this. i cut too.. and im also not one for attention i do it to hide the pain and shit.. but anyways great job, 5/5

Omg, dear!!! Totally beautiful.. I can't even tell you how much I LOVED this poem! I myself, along with many others, could definitely relate to this piece. I am an ex-cutter and I felt all of these emotions everytime I brought that knife to my skin. You did an amazing job and your choice of words... wow! The flow was smooth and I could feel the emotion dripping from this poem. Also, the last paragraph just brought the entire thing together beautifully. Great job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

I CAN REALLY RELATE I LOVED IT AND I THINK YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER I KNOW HOW IT FEELS

I love how the suspense builds in it.
and omg the ending was absolutely perfect!
my jaw dropped at the ending/
i mean wow!

5/5 id rate it higher if i could!

Now THAT is pain. Despite what you've gone through, I can see you've found another release. Still, awsome work.