This one is good to. i know how u feel cuz i have a freind that does the same thing. i just wish he could relize i love him. (dont b a stranger either)

~shanny~

Aww.. so sweet .. loved it
Great job, once again
Your a great poet

5/5

Keep up the wonderful job

I liked it, but am getting tired of the same stuff. I'd like to see more emotion in your work, i hope that you dont take my comments the wrong way, i just say what i feel most of the time.
You do have talent, and with some work you could be a great writer.
love Tara-Kay
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