Comments : How not to have fun in a play park

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Thanks to you i'm never gonna swing again. but good poem

    your servant:
    david

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    Aww child memories :P N ouchie poor you that must've hurted^^ . Anyway nicely written 5/5 def. Darn not first to comment *lolz* I'm not good at leaving comments so pls don't mind it. :) And did you read my new poem? Well later
    Much love, Br0k3n