Behind her back

by StormyStar   Mar 16, 2007


When we are together were stronger than ever,
i can't leave your side together with pride,
the way i feel is like it's a secret ,
behind he back is how your creeping,
i won't do that, that's not how i play.

you know it's true, what would you do,
just get what you want and be on your way,
your a damn player n your not here to stay,
your go behind her back until she leaves.

i can't change how i feel,
i just care and it's too real,
the innocents you bring,
i can't help but forgive you i can't be that mean.

being mad at you won't last too long,
even if i yell at you and grab the phone,
I'm not good at hiding how i feel but I'll try.
i wouldn't like her to get with you while we are together,
i don't think i can trust you so much.
with something so sweet like that.

the love i have will always last
even id your creeping behind her back.
the pain you put in my heart will never fade,
even until the last of my days.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I did find alot of grammar mistakes, and i think that should be changed to help with the flow, but being the person i am, i corrected the grammar as i read it, so it didnt change the way in which it was read.
    I really thought it was good, i liked the wording and the style. a very sweet poem.
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    There was alot of grammar mistakes in this missing letters and other words that just didn't belong. This brokee up the flow real bad, I was reallt disappointed in this. I would under stand little minor mistakes but about 70% of this poem needed fixing sorry Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Very good poem. Liked it a lot. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Very powerful emotions. Was this true?
    One suggestion is to capitalize the beginning of each line.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Nice and a lovely write, you are a good writer, keep up the great job so i can return and read more of your grea work, you deserve a 5/5 tha is why you are getting a 5/5 from me. keep it up.

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