Interesting a good write a great idea but the ryhme seems forced,
nessa

I really liked this one!

This poem was AMAZING i love it

David i already told u i dont sing!!! its really for the best.
5/5 always

Sing me your song, like mockingbirds in heaven
let's see if my lucky number is still seven

That made me smile for some reason xD
But anyways, this was way interesting . You`r style of writing is different ; along with what you write about . And i like that . Some of the rhymes seem forced, but overall, not bad .
..__MiNDYY

Wow different i havent read something like that before yet
but all in all i still iked the flow of it
i thought it was good:D
keep it up
tk
care

Wow and im having trouble with my lover?

Gees i love ur style of rittin its great lol

stacey xoxox

That is so sweet..my guy says that my voice sounds like an angels,i can see why guys fall in love with their girls voice.
poems like this make us realize how much we are appreciated

Such short and simple poems but they have such a strong meaning and they really build up tension like when I read it I want to read it all over again. Awesome!! =D Much love from Roxy

Beautiful! i loved this....and i do admire your sense of life and love for history!

You know what this really reminds me of ( i dont know if this is the right thing but when i read this poem this is what i thought of): i thought of a man going against and army alone and telling someone like his garudian angel to sing to him one last time b/c he might not come back and to still sing when he is gone....i really like this poem it made me think alot about some things ....

For me this is a whole new outlook towards death, more than a fear it sounds like a relief,
its beautiful !