Short but good. nice job. the repetition actually worked pretty well.
5/5 - Rose

Damn this is like really good!!! i try to be good at poems but i dunno some how i feel they suck but yea i need to put more on here... the only reason y is to c wat other ppl think bout them but yea... nice job

I love this!!>.great!!..and yes i am lucky to have found shane, hes perfect for me... and i love him!...thanks!..,5/5 from me

Heyyy greatttt poem!!! Normaly i cant stand repetition but in someee few case i dont mind ittt

&& you used it perfectlyy here

5/5