Wowwwww I loved this. "annoy you, and destroy you" That was my favroite line :) and "he will dislocate and break your neck" that was just scary:|

May he rape you of your alibi
[[Oh my god! I love that line. Would you be bothered if I used it in a poem I wrote? =] Message me if you don't mind. =] ]]

Anyways.
Very interesting poem. Again, you don't exactly follow a certain rhyme scheme, but your flow is astonishing. I love the stories you tell.
Wow. Your poems are fresh and unquie. It's good to see some new not-so-cliche faces around here. =]
Thank you for the great reads.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

HI IM TAMI U COMMENT ON MY POEM SPECIAL GIRL CAN U PLZ TELL ME WHERE ARE THE SPELLING MISTAKES PLZ

I loved this one so much
i mean at times the flow was off
a little bit
but it made the poem that
much better

nice rhying and great job

5/5