Yes, this is Part I of a hopefully 3 or 4 part poem. I go bored, what can I say? ;)

Woah intense!!! I loved the description and wording! You did an amazing job!!

Thank you!

This is a interesting poem I most read the other parts congrats on winning Hm in my contest

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The metaphoric style of this gave it an added depth. i enjoyed the poem for that reason. nice imagery. <3

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Oh I love it. Great flow and rhythm. Keep up the great writing.

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