Thts really touchy roxy dear..u r really right...sometimes wht u see is not real at all.Good one!!
5/5

GOd bless u

Amazing i love it well as ive said before we can relate to each other and i feel as close to you as a sister loving the poem love jamez ;)

Excellent! Well-written! I loved it! Keep up the awesome work!!

~~Teres (Spanish)

Wow this is awesome good job its awesome lots of power in the words and soo much feeling i think good job but living life is always a good idea lol;)

keenan

Hey kristen here ths is a great poem! but anyways i can't tell the police or that guy will get out and kill me it's not easy as said and done. yes it will kill me everyday knowing i didn't tell the cops or anyone.great poem by the way.

Beautifull i kno ive commented on it before but i think it deserves this other one heheh ;)

Great poem....beautiful work...sooo very true....well expressed!..... well done!
kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

I really liked this poem i found the ryhme to be great and the flow nicely written. The word choice was great emotion strong. Well done on a nice dark poem~mel

Fantastic poem, so true and touching. 5/5

Amazing one .. deep feelings ... and a lot of meaning.. great job .. keep it up

I really liked this! I think its captivating....very very well done.

O_O damn.. your writing is well done! ^_^ woot! I like it!

It was such a nice writing style. nicely panned aswell

i will give you 5/5

I like this one .. so sad and so full of emotions.. and yes, very relatable..and the awesome flow to it..wow. . amazing piece..

~Wake~