Burning

by x Mo x   Mar 18, 2007


My chest is on fire.
My stomach is turning.
My eyes are aglow
With thoughts that are burning.

There's a fire within me,
Burning so bright.
It feels so amazing.
It feels so right.

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  • 18 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I am not a fan of the word "amazing," I think it sounds weak, but that of course, is a personal preference. Short and to the point. Good write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Words

    Pretty much exactly how it feels to fall in love, nice job putting it into words.

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