Leave it on the down low

by robin milford   Mar 18, 2007


You broke my heart
when you up and left
with no word
of your departure
Got you someone new
toss me aside
without a second thought
I thought I was more than just a lay
but apparently not
to you at least
You deceived
saying you loved me
What a fool I was
I sit and wait
for your call
but the phone doesn't sing
your special ring

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really sad and heart-aching but i didn't understand a thing
    'when you up and left'
    What does it mean?
    It seems like it's cos of my weak ability of understanding
    So good job
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very sad poem, however I liked it. I thought it flowed nicely.

    Always interesting to read. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by twittle

    I feel the same way i cant wait to see him cuz i have to go and get my stuff soon i am going to leve crying but i know how u feel to love someone who dont love u

  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    I really liked the poem im sorry that i made you think that but i didnt have a choice in the matter. besides i dont say those words without meaning them

    love ya
    april

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