Your words flow together so well. This was an interesting piece; and i enjoyed reading it 5/5 love.

Reminds me of Ben Thompson's poems......very dark....

In the depths of an unforgiving sea
As an anchor dragging me down
Never again to see the light of day
Echoing screams the only sound

Perfect description of depression. Cindy, hope you feel better soon....Love, Debbie

Oh Cindy,

"In the depths of an unforgiving sea
As an anchor dragging me down
Never again to see the light of day
Echoing screams the only sound"

A true definition of what sadness is and what it can do to you. A trully emotional write, dear friend. I feel the depth of this. The pull, the anguish, the pain.

Great Job.

Always,
Jeannie

Grey fog you can't fight through
Dark clouds linger above me
Body struggling just to stay awake
Eyes slowly closing, so I can't see
^^^
Oh how I can relate, my dear friend.
To feel one is not alone in these feelings somehow makes it a little more
bearable ....
You have poured much emotion into this write Cindy, heart touching!

Take care deary
Luanne

Sad but yet so different

In the depths of an unforgiving sea
As an anchor dragging me down
Never again to see the light of day
Echoing screams the only sound

Somehow it seems as if i hv never read anything like this from u before, the way u expressed in this one is so unique and its just crosses ur heart.

I just wish i could be helpful.

all the best and take care

Your imagery is really well done here a sad piece that reminds me of myself, and some what the words you write sounds so much like myself again, i really feel part of what your going through and i wish i coudl help you in some way, peace be with you honey *hugs* xox sam

The poem has such great depth and sadness, as if your soul itself is speaking aloud.
Very nicelly penned, beautiful flow.

So much emotion and feeling in this one. Sad but nicely expressed.

Man i wish that all the pain goes away or that i can take it away from you. Your poem is very deep and good.Great Job!!!

This is an amazing poem Cindy, but then again, you are an amazing poet!

take care, Sarah xxx

You are such a talented writer 5/5 keep em comin

Well done on this! the poem structure was wat i loved the most!

5/5 David

A very powerful and emotional write. Excellent