I really like this poem, it's sort of like i can relate, only my dad just left us, he didn't want nothing else to do with our family.

I like this so much i mean i have no father here by my side neither and erading this poem really brought tears to my eyes

Very, very nice write! very sad though. keep up the good work!
god bless

Omgggggosh thats so fxin gorgeous

I really like this...It was deep and really sad...But the vocab was just right...

5/5

I really like this...It was deep and really sad...But the vocab was just right...

5/5

Sad, a good poem. 5/5 i say.

Awwwz this was a very sad poem!!
i hope this is not a life time experience for you cuz i bet that would be hard.

but if it is im here to talk ne time as you had told me! =D

<3 i love you silly

I could really feel the sadness in the poem when reading it. Though it was beatiuflly written, and flowed really well. A pleasure to read. Keep writing.