Comments : For one second

  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Superb.....:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Stunning poem! beautiful use of repetition! and the last stanza was PERFECT!

    "For one second
    I imagine to get over you
    I found I could die in my thoughts"

    Breathtaking ending. Loved it. well done

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    This is also a great love poem, life without someone you truly love is just sorrows as u've mention in your 1st stanza thats u saw darkways ahead- nice imagination man- there is a reason why ur my favourites author- thrilling.

  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    That was a lovely poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Farrah

    Ba7eb awii that poem
    its gr8!

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "For one second
    I imagine life without you
    I saw dark ways ahead

    For one second
    I imagine life without you
    I felt scary voices in streets

    for one second
    I imagine forgetting you
    I scared of ending breaths

    For one second
    I imagine life without you
    aching Hours changed in years"

    Yes, when we have get used to something and we have something precious even a thought of loosing it makes us scare.. It is good to realize what life would be with someone. Many people learn to appreciate their love after loosing it, not before it which very sad.

  • 15 years ago

    by Freedom

    Nice writing style,nice words,and nice poem :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    It took me mere a second to rate this poem 5 hehe , So well written

    Cheers
    Biya

  • 15 years ago

    by iTdOnTmAtTeR

    Thoughts i am sure alot of people go thru wen experiencing a confusing relationship, thats how i saw it..i loved the ending tho, real nice job.

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. such a sad and heartbreaking poem.. Very effective though. Great job

  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    Very nice and true i love it you really touched me