Comments : A child's dream lullaby

  • 17 years ago

    by Aure

    WOW this one I like very much, you show that you don't need no rhymscheme to write a poem, the words are enough to show. This is the greatest compliment I can give

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This was very dark. but the topic was different. i liked the way you wrote it. showed how you felt very cleary.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    I loved it i voted 5/5

    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is vivid, dark and twisted everything i love in a poem, well done!! you use such a good vocabulary and ur poetry is amazing, wow, i am in awe!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is vivid, dark and twisted everything i love in a poem, well done!! you use such a good vocabulary and ur poetry is amazing, wow, i am in awe!!

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Crying my tears of vexatious sorrow
    wishing that there could be no tomorrow,
    the world would not be that fortuitous

    **amazing imagery....wow** and i love your word choices, thingsl iek htis afre often cliched but you do a really good job avoiding it. one questions whats lusus naturae?? great stuff...5/5

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Half0Empty

    Wow. lol i like it, i really like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    I love your poetry its amazing, i can tell you write so much from your heart

    brittaqny (MD)

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Wow...i love how i cant spell my own name right tis brittany *

  • 17 years ago

    by LaLa

    One word [intense] Crazy intense. Like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    I LOVE your perspective!!!!!!!!!!!!!