Comments : WE ALL NEED SOMEONE

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    Very well spoken, I think we've all felt this, once, twice...and some still.
    Great write 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I was having a bad day and my friend read me this piece, not only do I love the way they read it, but I love how you wrote this too. I think the rhyming scheme was interesting and they style you chose was well penned. Great use of emotion and wonderfully written

    • 9 years ago

      by Tylor Dent

      Thank you very much I appreciate that. I'm glad it could make you feel better. Someday when I'm upset I come back and read it as well.

      Best wishes,
      Sam

  • 7 years ago

    by ketaki

    Good well written.

  • 7 years ago

    by ketaki

    Good well written