Whoa. that was a beautiful read. why do ppl not comment you! THEY SHOULD! its nice poetry!!!!! whats ton amour? haha something love, but what language? 5/5.

I liek this one...

but idk what all the words mean,

but the big words make it more sophisticated

On the contrary I thought the use of the slightly larger words held the piece together, without them, I don't think it would have worked at all but with them its lovely. Well thought out too in that respect.

Drusus

Loved it. :)