The individual lines were great, and kept me into it from the beginning. however the flow was "perfect". that could be tweaked a bit i guess. good job. its really cute.

I love this poem...

there is so much love in it!

the flow is brilliant & the wording is perfect...

GREAT JOB!

Very intense..defenite real emotion. nice work 5/5

Yes I agree with the last comment about the flow. I think we share an individual problem indeed. The use of language in such a well mannered way on the topic in question however, I personally thought was wonderful.

Drusus

What a wonderful experience!

WOW this poem is awesome! the flow is so great! and the imagery is...just..wow.. 5/5 5/5 5/5!!!